My name is Zamir and this is my freaken awesome blog. I created this blog for people who like playing playstation 3 games that will be awesome and i will talk about two new games that are coming out this march!
Thursday, February 25, 2010
Bad Company With The Gods
.As you all know two new games are coming out this March, Battlefield Bad Company 2 and God of War 3.
Now Lets talk about Battlefield Bad Company 2. Battlefield Bad Company 1 was a good game the story mode was awesome and online was pretty cool but the controls weren't and the accuracy was poor, Now When Battlefield Bad Company 2 multiplayer demo came out the accuracy and controls is a lot better. Battlefield is an awesome game and it has an awesome story mode, come on destroying buildings and all kids of stuff. The game play videos i have seen look awesome.
It's not like every day you play a game destroying everything in your path. Battlefield Bad Company 2 multiplayer demo was good, because new stuff added to your kits it's like every kit has its own perk. In story mode its looks a lot than part 1, well yeah part 1 was awesome too destroying everything and riding around destroying everything but they improved a lot more in part 2. For some reason it's hard to fly the helicopter because somehow I end up committing suicide. So if you played Battlefield Bad Company than you definitely gonna want to check out Battlefield Bad Company 2 in stores March 2,2010
Now this next game I'm gonna talk about is God of War 3. I played the demo and trust me the graphics for God of War 3 is Extremely Gorgeous. When I played the demo it was amazing the game play is still the same. If you have played God of War 1 and God of War 2 the story is amazing in it to and I'm pretty sure this game is going to be freaken crazy. Even thought this game hasn't came out yet looking at the demo this game has to be "GAME OF THE YEAR." I know its a little bit early to tell but I have a feeling it is going to be game of the Year. I mean come on look at his face
He looks like he's on a rampage or something. This game is gonna be bloddy extremely bloddy, becasue after looking at the graphics in this game you can tell it's gonna be one heck of a game
So if you've played God of War 1 and God of War 2 than you are going to want to buy this game. I can already you wont regret buying this game at all. God of War 3 will be in stores March 16, 2010
Zamir, after you've written a blog, read it to yourself a few times. After you've done this, read it out loud (this helps A LOT). Also, spell check. There are about 50 errors on this post and most of them could have been avoided by simply going over it a few times.
One more thing, try not to write as if you are instant messaging someone. For example: use "going" and not "gonna".
Take this as constructive criticism to help you improve your writing.
Hey Zamir! I have to agree with Alex's comments. Even though blogging is considered casual, it's still a very public forum. You're going to want to make it sound a bit more professional. Start by fixing your run-on sentences. Periods are your friend!
Now on the plus-side: I thought you had some great comments on gameplay, and you used the artwork well. And "I mean, look at his face," was pretty funny. You're a funny kid, Zamir! Keep using humor in your blogs, and you'll have more people following!
I also agree with Alex and Wendy. Some of your sentences were well written and had potential, but you lacked commas and periods in certain parts.
You also misspelled some words. That can throw a reader off track trying to figure out what you trying to say rather than focusing on what your actually saying.
Good job, though. Just keep these suggestions in mind when your writing your next blog. Don't rush through it, take your time and your end result will be better.
"The world has become a battlefield everywhere you go, the blood of brothers and sons scream out against you. Perhaps you can not yet hear it, because the soul is not your own, but you will. You will"
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ReplyDeleteZamir, after you've written a blog, read it to yourself a few times. After you've done this, read it out loud (this helps A LOT). Also, spell check. There are about 50 errors on this post and most of them could have been avoided by simply going over it a few times.
ReplyDeleteOne more thing, try not to write as if you are instant messaging someone. For example: use "going" and not "gonna".
Take this as constructive criticism to help you improve your writing.
Hey Zamir! I have to agree with Alex's comments. Even though blogging is considered casual, it's still a very public forum. You're going to want to make it sound a bit more professional. Start by fixing your run-on sentences. Periods are your friend!
ReplyDeleteNow on the plus-side: I thought you had some great comments on gameplay, and you used the artwork well. And "I mean, look at his face," was pretty funny. You're a funny kid, Zamir! Keep using humor in your blogs, and you'll have more people following!
Agreed, the "I mean, look at his face," was pretty funny.
ReplyDeleteI also agree with Alex and Wendy. Some of your sentences were well written and had potential, but you lacked commas and periods in certain parts.
ReplyDeleteYou also misspelled some words. That can throw a reader off track trying to figure out what you trying to say rather than focusing on what your actually saying.
Good job, though. Just keep these suggestions in mind when your writing your next blog. Don't rush through it, take your time and your end result will be better.